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Wed 11 Sep 2019 09:17:23 AM EDT Slept from ten to six-thirty. Woke several times in the night. High of eighty-seven today, with thunderstorms some time after noon. Work: - Sign circuit order for landscaping building Done. - Email Yardi about demo Done. - DKIM Not much. Twenty-minute walk at lunch. Hot and humid. Heard crickets. Saw a morning dove, a blue jay, and a little white butterfly. Coworkers in the lunch room talking about where they were on September 11. Told the anecdote about that night, driving home from work, I saw a girl sitting by the side of the road with a sign reading "give peace a chance" and how it made me angry. Somewhat embarrassed, or at least ambivalent, about my anger in retrospect. Home: - Book hotel for U-Con Done. (Confirmation #98197992) - Buy bonds Done. BNDX. Thinking about short format stuff, like short stories. There isn't really time for the classic progression: status quo → disruption → inadequate or misapprehending fix effort → failure worsens disruption → major fix "solves" disruption → characters settle into new status quo. Short forms have to frame out — what? — two or maybe three of those? Probably: failure worsens disruption → major fix "solves" disruption, with hints of the proceeding and subsequent events. So, the writer probably has to outline the whole chain, then just write the Worse → Fix part. Status quo → disruption → inadequate or misapprehending fix effort → failure worsens disruption → major fix "solves" disruption → characters settle into new status quo. Interesting to consider this in terms of a police procedural. The police follow the progression as they try to solve the murder, but, before then, the murderer had followed his own progression. For the murderer, the murder isn't a goal in itself — it's an attempt to fix a disruption to his status quo. Finished reading The Housekeeper and The Profession. Sweet. Servings: grains 4/6, fruit 2/4, vegetables 5/4, dairy 3/2, meat 4/3, nuts 0/0.5 Breakfast: egg sandwich, carrots Brunch: banana, cucumber, coffee Lunch: yogurt, celery, tomato, grapfruit Afternoon snack: coffee Dinner: Italian sub, fries 127/82

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